Poetry as Compass


A talk prepared for the Good Life Center's Monday Night Meeting series
First given in Harborside, Maine, on July 5, 1999
Greetings to all of you. It's a pleasure to be here, of course -- and it's more than an ordinary pleasure, in that when Kathy Mills first called to invite me to participate in this illustrious Monday Night series, I assumed that I'd be asked to speak about the experience of working closely with Helen Nearing as the editor for her memoir, Loving and Leaving the Good Life. No, not exactly, said Kathy: we're actually inviting you to come and read poems.
What luck! Over the course of the past year, I've had the opportunity to work closely with a number of people involved in the Good Life Center as part of an effort to create a durable, ongoing publishing program, which ideally will be a reliable source of revenues to continue the work of the Nearings. As I've learned more about the Good Life Center, I've come to understand that the Monday Night series and the other educational projects of the Center are not intended primarily to inculcate a reverential or elegiac view of Helen and Scott. To the contrary, and to the credit of the many people who have worked so hard since Helen's death to create an energetic program here, the task is much more in keeping with the Nearings own approach to livelihood, activism, and world service. It's up to us to carry on, each in his or her own way. The hours I spent with Helen at that table by the wide window ("not looking at each other, but looking in the same direction," as Rilke said, meaning the task at hand) underscored this for me. The world around us is a place of enormous pain and possibility. Each of us who recognizes the necessity must find a way to become one of the restorers of life, instead of enlisting in the ranks of the destroyers. When in the midst of struggling over some passage in the book that Helen felt wasn't coming clear, she suddenly took up my hand in her two hands and studied my palm. Ah, she said, tracing the head line: You've come into this life to do certain things, and you're doing them. I knew as she said this that I wanted it to be true; it was somewhat true, and it could be more true. Helen's way was to put a question back in the question-poser's hands. My way (as editor, writer, and political citizen) is to want to find words that will serve a specific need and situation.

I've called my talk "Poetry as Compass." The constructions in language I love most are essentially playful, even when responding to urgencies that are desperate. As Robert Frost says in the conclusion of his paean to wood-splitting -- one of many Frost poems you can read repeatedly over years, and never exhaust --

Only where love and need are one,
And the work is play for mortal stakes,
Is the deed ever really done
for Heaven and the future's sakes.

This is akin to the words of Czeslaw Milosz, who is the living poet whose work I love most:
What is poetry that does not save
Nations or people?

And what is a compass? As a child, I loved compasses. I had one (I still have it, as you see) that was easy to carry in a pocket, with a string around the neck. Flat as tablet, with a rotating dial. At its center a shallow basin of water, with some a kind of esprit in the middle, the proverbial "ghost in the machine," an animated needle that can't rest, that will swivel and spin on its pivot as you turn, seeking alignment with the northern magnetic axis of the globe beneath our feet. I carry it in the woods, and I carry it when hiking for hours up and down sidewalks in unfamiliar cities. No cord, no battery, no buttons or antenna. A device both mechanical and alchemical. A piece of technology that cannot be "improved upon."
Likewise, a poem. Because the word "technology" has come to connote space shuttles and CAT scan machines, software and genetic engineering, it may sound startling to say that poetry is a technology. Yet unlike the seemingly limitless proliferation of gadgets and procedures glutting industrialized society, think of the poem as a technology more comparable to a chair, a scissors, a shirt, or a broom. These relatively simple inventions, which have changed hardly at all in function or even design, aside from changes in materials, are recognizable and reliable. One can construct them by hand, from memory. And as I said of the compass, it's not easy to "improve upon" the traditional chair, scissors, shirt, or broom -- and in fact, many of the older ones still work best.
I often think about the ways a poem can also be as useful as an ordinary household implement -- a tool for cutting or sweeping away detritus, a well-worn, comfortable piece of clothing, a device for relocating oneself when disoriented on a wooded slope or city street. And not only for dealing with immediate surroundings. A poem can move through time, through space, can penetrate or puncture the membrane between what is real and what is merely seen. This membrane is a border too often presumed to be impermeable, though it isn't. I love that other sense of the word, "compass" -- a range, or circumference: what is within reach of touch or imagination, what lies within the embrace of a circle inscribed by that other type of compass, the ancient Egyptian and Babylonian mathematical instrument, a pivoting pair of legs with stylus or pencil on one side, for inscribing circles and angles or measuring intervals. As John Donne wrote, utilizing the compass for an exemplary conceit: "Thy firmness makes my circle just,/ And makes me end, where I begun."
You can tell that I enjoy devising then extending analogies, perhaps almost to the breaking point. Even so, I'd like to read you some examples of actual poems. Such as these are incantations one can use, day in and day out, to solve problems and execute tasks, to plumb the past or augur the future.
I'm going to read "Wife Hits Moose." It's very easy to understand, but I should note that towards the end the poet is tweaking a slightly affected yet functional convention of contemporary poetry workshops, whereby the narrator is asserted to be not necessarily the writer him- or herself, not exactly, but rather the "quote-unquote" speaker of the poem.

[Thomas Lux's "Wife Hits Moose":]
Sometime around dusk moose lifts
his heavy, primordial jaw, dripping, from pondwater
and, without psychic struggle,
decides the day, for him, is done: time
to go somewhere else. Meanwhile, wife
drives one of those roads that cut straight north,
a highway dividing the forests

not yet fat enough for the paper companies.
This time of year full dark falls
about eight o'clock -- pineforest and blacktop
blend. Moose reaches road, fails
to look both ways, steps
deliberately, ponderously . . . Wife
hits moose, hard,

at slight angle (brakes slammed, car
spinning) and moose rolls over hood, antlers --
as if diamond-tipped -- scratch windshield, car
damaged: rib of moose imprint
on fender, hoof shatters headlight.
Annoyed moose lands on feet and walks away.
Wife is shaken, unhurt, amazed.

-- Does moose believe in a Supreme Intelligence?
Speaker does not know.
-- Does wife believe in a Supreme Intelligence?
Speaker assumes as much: spiritual intimacies
being between the spirit and the human.
Does speaker believe in a Supreme Intelligence?
Yes. Thank You.

This is a poem by Thomas Lux, written in the early 1980s, probably under the influence of "wise-cracking philosophical expressionists such as John Berryman and Frank O'Hara. Its diction is odd and arresting, a mix of traditional literary mannerism and bureaucratic "reportage," like an insurance claim filed by an Augustan barrister. Its setting is clear, the description although spare is vivid and memorable, and even the sudden sundering at the end, a Brechtian "breaking of the frame " while abrupt and outlandish, is plausible -- rendering sensations a reader recognizes, not merely cerebral but palpable, in a natural and likable speaking voice. This is a poem written in what has imprecisely come to be known as "free verse," in which the more obvious attributes of historical verse (recurrent meter and periodic rhyme, for example) have been subordinated to conversational phrasing, a different type of rhythmical organization, and visual intensity. Yet the poem is most decidedly not prose. It moves and operates other-wise.
I'm assuming that many people in this audience do not make a daily custom of reading poems. Whether I'm accurate or inaccurate in that assumption, I'm sure it's worth taking a moment to re-establish the acquaintance of the basic elements of a poem. I recently made three visits to the kindergarten class in our town, and in each session I read a couple of poems and the students drew pictures to help articulate what they noticed and enjoyed in the poems. The children also said "Ding!" when they heard either a rhyme or a "comparison," since we had talked about how some poems are particularly engaged in music (rhythms and rhymes) and some are particularly engaged by metaphors (similes and analogies, sometimes signaled by the word "like," sometimes not). Let's start with an Emily Dickinson poem that's filled with comparisons. Please feel welcome to say "Ding!"

[Dickinson's: "The Wind -- tapped like, a tired Man . . .":]
The Wind – tapped like a tired Man –
And like a Host – "Come in"
I bold answered – entered then
My Residence within

A Rapid – footless Guest –
To offer whom a Chair
Were as impossible as hand
A Sofa to the Air –

No Bone had He to bind Him –
His Speech was like the Push
Of numerous Humming Birds at once
From a superior Bush –

His Countenance – a Billow –
His Fingers, as He passed
Let go a music – as of tunes
Blown tremulous in Glass –

He visited – still flitting –
The like a timid Man
Again, He tapped – 'twas flurriedly –
And I became alone –

Notice the metaphors, not on the surface but embedded like the poem's very musculature: the wind tapping like a man, "a Rapid – footless guest" with "no Bone . . . to bind him" and with "Speech . . . like the Push / of numerous Humming Birds at once / From a superior Bush." The comparisons layer one upon another, this portrait of the wind: "His Countenance – a Billow – / His Fingers, as He passed / Let go a music – as of tunes / Blown tremulous in Glass – . . ." The more you think and feel your way through this evocation, the more it becomes both tactile and hallucinatory. Some readers will notice that on the page the capitalized He is reminiscent of the conventional capitalization of the Christian deity, and some who notice the unexpected and welcome hilarity of the passage: "To offer whom a Chair / Were as impossible as hand / A Sofa to the Air – . . ."
Now let's hear a poem that's almost intoxicating in its rhythms and rhymes. With the children, I read Frost's "Stopping By Woods on a Snowy Evening" (which several of them could recite by memory after only one hearing!). With adults I often read a poem that's a bit lustier, Edna St. Vincent Millay's "Recuerdo" or more unnerving despite its chamber-music resonance, Thomas Hardy's "During Wind and Rain". Say "Ding!" if you like (oh, go ahead . . .):

[Millay's "Recuerdo":]
We were very tired, we were very merry --
We had gone back and forth all night on the ferry.
It was bare and bright, and smelled like a stable --
But we looked into a fire, we leaned across a table,
We lay on a hill-top underneath the moon;
And the whistles kept blowing, and the dawn came soon.

We were very tired, we were very merry --
We had gone back and forth all night on the ferry;
And you ate an apple, and I ate a pear,
From a dozen of each we had bought somewhere;
And the sky went wan, and the wind came cold,
And the sun rose dripping, a bucketful of gold.

We were very tired, we were very merry --
We had gone back and forth all night on the ferry.
We hailed, "Good morrow, mother!" to a shawl-covered head,
And bought a morning paper, which neither of us read;
And she wept, "God bless you!" for the apples and pears,
And we gave her all our money but our subway fairs.

[Hardy's "During Wind and Rain":]
    They sing their dearest songs --
    He, she all of them -- yea,
    Treble and tenor and bass,
        And one to play;
    With the candles mooning each face. . . .
        Ah, no; the years O!
How the sick leaves reel down in throngs!


    They clear the creeping moss --
    Elders and juniors -- aye,
    Making the pathways neat
        And the garden gay;
    and they build a shady seat. . . .
        Ah, no; the years, the years;
See, the white storm birds wing across!


    They are blithely breakfasting all --
    Men and maidens, yea,
    Under the summer tree,
        With a glimpse of the bay,
    While pet fowl come to the knee. . . .
        Ah, no; the years O!
And the rotten rose is ripped from the wall.


    They change to a high new house,
    He, she, all of them -- aye,
    Clocks and carpets and chairs
        On the lawn all day,
    and brightest things that are theirs. . . .
        Ah, no; the years, the years;
Down their carved names the raind-drop ploughs.

These are poems enriched enormously by the sonorous resources of the language -- consider, for instance the succession of vowels through which the phrases cohere and seem to "sing" -- yet both are poems permeated with the grief of a seasoned awareness of how ephemeral life's youthful joys can seem. Neither Millay nor Hardy is merely musical in these examples. Their poems are striking in visual vividness as well, and notice how a certain bittersweet nostalgia is countered by modern and urban details. Ultimately, the reason I present these as instances of sublimely "aural" poetry is that overall, the power of the poems' implied dramatic situations and imagery is inseparable from the profound musicality of the writing.
For comparison, another poem that approaches somewhat the same subject as Hardy's "During Wind and Rain" with a rather more terse strain of music is Philip Larkin's poem, "Days." You'll hear the bareness of the phrasing, but also the riddle-like wryness:

[Philip Larkin's "Days":]
What are days for?
Days are where we live.
They come, they wake us
Time and time over.
They are to be happy in:
Where can we live but days?

Ah, solving that question
Brings the priest and the doctor
In their long coats
Running over the fields.

In addition to the metaphorical and musical modes, a third broad category of poetry is the narrative, a tradition spanning back to Gilgamesh and The Odyssey -- our daughter was awestruck at the thought that some poems took weeks to recite aloud -- and revived with great verve in recent years, perhaps partly as a stratagem for being accessible to readers predisposed by popular fiction toward strong characters and dramatic situation and away from the seemingly "ornamental" or "symbolical" arcanum of verse. Here is Ellen Bryant Voigt's poem "The Trust."

[Ellen Bryant Voigt's "The Trust":]
Something was killing sheep
but it was sheep the dog attended on the farm --
a black-and-white border collie, patrolling his fold
like a parish priest. The second time the neighbor came,
claiming to have spotted the dog at night, a crouched figure
slithering toward the pen on the far side of the county,
the farmer let him witness how the dog,
alert and steady, mended the frayed
edge of the flock, the clumped sheep calm
as they drifted together along the stony hill.
But still more sheep across the glen were slaughtered,
and the man returned more confident. This time,
the master called his dog forward,
and stroking the eager head, prized open the mouth to find,
wound around the base of the back teeth -- squat molars
the paws can't reach to clean -- small coils of wool,
fine and stiff, like threads from his own jacket.
So he took down the rifle from the rack
and shot the dog and buried him,
his best companion in the field for seven years.
Once satisfied, the appetite is never dulled again.
Night after night, its sweet insistent promise
drives the animal under the rail fence and miles away
for a fresh kill; and with guilty cunning brings him back
to his familiar charges, just now stirring in the early light,
brings him home to his proud husbandry.

It's unjust to speak of this amazing evocation mainly with reference to its "story," as Voigt is audibly a virtuoso in tones, sounds, and cadences as well as exposition. And see how her metaphors are inlaid, as smooth as parquet. Of course, many poems draw upon all of these assets -- metaphors and musical phrasing, with dramatic intensity developed either implicitly "between the lines" or explicitly as narrative -- which I have delineated here for the sake of contemplation.
The most powerful poems are multifariously inventive (perhaps lavishly, perhaps transparently so): sonically and linguistically complex, rhythmical, metaphorical, and intense with dramatic. Coming back to this notion of the "technology" of poetry, it's important to remember that poems are language with a maximum imaginable sensitivity per cubic iota, like a force field of nerves, like a magnetized needle spinning on a dial. Even a very spartan, elliptical poem (such as one finds among the ancient Chinese masters) can be dense with the presence of what goes unsaid, what is between the lines.

[Robert Herrick's "Upon Julia's Clothes":]
Whenas in silks my Julia goes,
Then, then (methinks) how sweetly flows
That liquefaction of her clothes.

Next, when I cast mine eyes and see
That brave vibration each way free,
O how that glittering taketh me!

That, written by an English cleric in 1648! It can only be read with a gasp . . .
I could do this all night, and all day tomorrow, and on into next week. "Had we but world enough, and time . . .", I would read you Frost's "To Earthward" and "Directive," Paul Celan's "Hymn," Wordsworth's "Tintern Abbey," Milosz's "Preparation," Yeats's "The Cat and the Moon" and "Prayer for My Daughter," Stephen Dobyns's "Spiritual Chickens" and "How to Like It," Robert Pinsky's "The Shirt," and Heather McHugh's "The Trouble with 'In'," as well as poems by Ezra Pound, Seamus Heaney, Jorie Graham, Adrienne Rich, Hayden Carruth, Louise Glück, Paul Blackburn, Charles Wright, Denise Levertov, and Zbigniew Herbert. Staggering, demanding, but readily accessible poems. And notably missing from my recitations so far are examples of poems that embody the political eloquence and fury so well tended at the hearth of this Nearing household.
We're living is a epoch of unprecedented richness and diversity in poetry. There are now in publication poets whose work would ravish any conceivable sensibility, temperament, or sense of humor, if only we remembered to look and listen.
But I would be a fool to miss the opportunity to read some of my own poems, so I will do so. Let me close this part of the program with a lovely evocation of an encompassed world unto itself, yet a world in and of the larger universe. This is "Eaton's Boatyard," by Castine, Maine poet Philip Booth, a work of art that brought me to this place, here and now, this stretch of Cape Rozier coastline, years before I ever visited in person:

[Philip Booth's "Eaton's Boatyard":]
To make do, making a living:
            to throw away nothing,
practically nothing, nothing that may
come in handy;
    within an inertia of cracked paintcans,
frozen C-clamps, blown strips of tarp, and
pulling-boat molds,
    to be able to find,
for whatever it's worth,
            what has to be there:
the requisite tool
    in this culch there's no end to:
the drawshave buried in potwarp,
chain, and manila jibsheets,
            or, under the bench,
the piece that already may fit
                the idea it begins
to shape up:
    not to be put off by split rudders,
stripped outboards, half
a gasket, and nailsick garboards:
            to forget for good
all the old year's losses,
    save for
what needs to be retrieved:
        a life given to
how today feels:
    to make of what's here
what has to be made
to make do.

Jim Schley

Writer, Editor, Teacher, and Theatre Artist
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South Strafford, Vermont  05070
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